Thursday, January 6, 2011

3D Appeal Makeover -- Review of Travis' Model, Part 1!

What are the elements of an appealing female 3D face?



9 comments:

  1. great, did not know how important it is to manage well the proportions..thanks David
    Pablo.

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  2. You're very good at calling out the things that artists sometimes have trouble articulating during a critique, or seeing in their own work. Very nice stuff.

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  3. That was extremely informative. Thank you for going into detail and being thorough in your critique

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  4. This is really great. Super helpful. I am currently having some struggles translating my 2D design into 3D. It's also a female character, but I'm going more for a doofy/cute look than classic beauty. Here's my design and the in-progress face model. Any quick pointers?

    http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2011/143/0/c/bonnie_model_sheet_2_0_by_joshsobel89-d3h0ggq.jpg

    http://img121.imageshack.us/img121/2343/bonnieface.jpg

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  5. Nice design! I feel like the model gets too fat on the bottom.

    The lips should feel like they turn a corner at the edge of the lips, then cut inward. These lips only roll softly off the suface. The need dimensionality.

    I would go for a more connected nose at the base.

    The eyes have a sunken feeling.

    Nice.

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  6. I overhauled the face and added some tweaks that you suggested. What do you think? I'm still not sure if I'm happy with the nose...
    http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/7318/bonniecomparison.jpg

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